Mark of the Beast (Jjinja's NPC vs. Brutus)

(This is a run to help get Jjinja into the swing of Forum Rp, before his character gets accepted.)

Rules:

Well, you already know.
No God-modding
Minimum of Five-Lines
Rapid-Fire is allowed


Brutus stood atop a large building, his helmet glinting coldly in the moonlight, as he turned his head repeatedly. He sniffed the air, steam billowing from underneath the long-faced helmet, as he listened to the surrounding area. It was calm, and silent, but... at the same time, it was eerily active. For a night like this, many a Hollow and Arrancar were out, it seemed, consuming souls. It was just one of those nights where the bad guys seemed to want to converge into one mass and attack.

Suddenly out of a mist cloud, a very tall Arrancar with jet black hair and white glowing eyes. "Hello reaper. I noticed you are watching my minions. You know, devouring people just isn't fun without a good challenge." The Arrancar vanished and appeared again from behind using Sonido. "You up for it?" He asked with a cocky grin

(To help you with the process of "getting back into it", I'm going to go ahead and fix mistakes in your last post so you can see what would have been a better idea. It's all a working process. xD)

Edited Post:

Brutus nodded, already anticipating the move of the Arrancar. It seemed all of their attempts were the same whenever they initiated sonido; get behind the enemy. Did they not try for a different approach, ever? As the man before him was in the midst of his sonido, he unsheathed his zanpaku-to, already having a vague idea of where the man would stand. And... he was right! With a flick of the wrist, he had the edge of his blade pointing directly at the man's neck, fog once more coming from underneath the helmet as he breathed heavily. "Well, you're not making this very interesting, are you?" He asked, as he thrusted the zanpaku-to towards the throat of the Arrancar.

The Arrancar chuckled as he pulled to the right of the zanpakuto, ducking and removing his fists from his pockets to fist fight the Shinigami Captain "Predictable, typical Shinigami moves." He said moving to upper cut Brutus in his abdomen with his left fist "You're so steamy, don't get mad bro!" He jumped back and stretched his hand out forming a Cero on his finger tip "Wanna play dodge?" He said as the Cero grew bigger

Brutus shrugged, quickly depositing his Zanpaku-to into the sheathe once more, figuring he might as well fight on the same ground as the Arrancar before him. He took the punch, seeming to not be affected whatsoever as he merely took the hit, a slight grunt the only thing that escaped the lips of the Arrancar. "That's how you want to play? I can play that way." he said, as he took off his helmet, revealing his bull-like features, and long horns.

"I'll fight you on even ground." He said, as he walked forward, easily shadowing the man, at least 1.5 times taller than the man before him, seeing as Brutus stood at 10 ft. He ignored the cero, and pulled his head back, before bringing it down on top of the man. Never mind the fact that his head is as hard as a rock, as if it hit, the chance that the Arrancar's skull would shatter is well over a 50% chance.

The arrancar smiled an evil grin as he stopped his Cero and returned the headbutt head on laughing "Very good cowman! I'll have you know I am no ordinary Arrancar. I am Previo Espada 710. My Hierro was one of the strongest of my time." He said as he grabbed Brutus by the horns and began to push his headback "I'll thank you not to do that anymore, it's not very polite." He said putting his fists up in a boxing style with a sick smile on his face "You know I can tell you're going to be quite tasty." he chuckled

Brutus chuckled as the headbutt was returned, himself not injured in the least. "Well now, feisty, aren't we?" He then proceeded to watch as the man grabbed his horns, only a snort flying through his nose as he tried to force Brutus' head back, despite his arms being too short to do much to him. Brutus, instead, grabbed the man's head, and began squeezing. It would take nothing short of a miracle to get out of the death-grip the minotaur had on his head. The moment he squeezed, he was exerting an easy 200 lbs of pressure on the head of the man, increasing by roughly 50 lbs every second. If the Arrancar didn't do something fast, his head would fast become nothing but pumpkin mush.

The Arrancar was surprised by Brutus' brute strength and was quickly caught in his grip. Shit! If this guy doesn't get off me I'm dead and there are too many pretty girls out to eat tonight. he thought as he pondered how to get rid of this pest of a reaper. Thinking fast he used a Bala point blank in attempt to surprise him and blow him back, charging a Cero in his other in case the Bala wasn't enough to force him back.

The Bala hit him dead on, but did not have the desired affect. Brutus was pulled back, but he still kept a firm hand on the head of the Arrancar. There was no way he was going to let go short of one of his arms being cut off. However, the cero may just do the trick. By now, the pressure would have made the Arrancar's ears pop, and his skull would begin cracking. It might not be destroyed, but that isn't to say his skull hasn't started breaking. Brutus, seeing the Cero being charged up, brought up his knee, and pulled the man's head down at the same time, fully intending to splatter his brains against his own knee.

The Arrancars eyes were bloodshot now from the pressure and you could hear the cracking begin in his skull. He moved the Cero up to Brutus' face and grabbed his Zanpakuto to slash at his arms "If I am dying I am taking you with me!"He said firing the Cero as his eyes began to bulge out and his head exploded on Brutus' knee covering Brutus and the 10 foot area around them in blood.