Rain Numata

Name: Rain Numata
Nickname: N/A
Age: 333/ Looks about 19
Gender: Male
Squad: 2
Rank: 3rd Seat
Weapon(s): Several assortments of shontos and knives strapped around his body.
Personality:
Rain is more of the free spirited of the soul reaper. While he still possesses the drive that is characterized with most of squad 2 he doesn't let stress or serious things get to him. This may be a child like optimism or it may be a permanent trait. Rain is also highly intelligent and is aware that sometimes in life and battle that being smart is a good thing. However, Rain like most men love adventure and fails to see the harm he can bring upon himself by his own actions. Rain dreams to be great one day if not to be the best warrior to make it as a fighter who will be the protector of the universe. Rain is also very in tune to the evils of the world as his upbringing was not the easiest. This makes him insusceptible to many things and possible could be a negative thing as he will not be able to see a friend if he came to him.

Upon his death subsequent rebirth as a spirit within the Rukongai district, he was of no fault of his own put in the most murderous parts of the district. It was here that his outlook grew grimmer and reality hit him hard. His thoughts on battle is that it is not about good and evil but a test of who's conviction and will is stronger. His child like optimism still somewhat staying with him but also now he no longer had a problem staring evils and atrocities in the face without shying away from it. It made him a mentally and emotionally stronger person, also allowing him to see the world unsheltered which begun his quest for strength.
Physical Appearance:
Rain is very tall for his age with somewhat tan skin. He had a long body that a runner would kill for. Rain is also blessed with black ^ red long hair that sometimes ends up being a hands full. With piercing red eyes and seemingly pure white teeth. His skin holds no blemishes as his nanny's kept his skin clean through several herbs so he never went through acne. His skin has been noted to at times be as smooth as a babies but when fighting rough as the ground. Usually sporting a look of boredom or of not caring which with his hair being in his face only made it more apparent. While off the job you might catch him normally shirtless with some black or white jeans on. Added with that his jacket that shows plainly several knives strapped on it. While on the job, the soul reaper is able to host many images though often he goes for a mailman when undercover. Because one thing about it, no one ever seems to suspected or pay attention to the mailman
Bio:
Rain was born a Numata, and as such things were expected of him from birth. As a kid he was expected to start all the milestones of life early. And for the most part unknowingly he complied to that, walking and talking long before the natural time. His father was spiritually aware, but not as much as his mother. His mother family line held a substitute soul reaper so because of her family's always close presence with spirits of relatively high pressure almost every offspring held a degree of sensitivity to spirits. Rain however was the most attune since he held two bloodlines of that trait. His father held one power which was a rare skill to be able to be able to blend his own spiritual pressure behind others simply meaning he couldn't be sensed as his own pressure was washed out by others. His mother was a tracker, she could feel the slightest disturbance of spiritual pressure with impressive accuracy. And she could use her reiastu to craft small weapons like knives though they only lasted for a short amount of time.

Growing up as a child, intelligence or schooling was a must as well that he should participate in a sport. This kept Rain naive for a great part of his childhood as the immense educational and recreational demands his parents had set for him kept his too busy to notice much. It wasn't until he was growing towards puberty that he finally reached a plateau where even those demands weren't much anymore. His father began having him train at a dojo in martial skill, they focused two arts swordsmanship and muay thai. He seemed to take to this a little too well, being cooped up in school or in practice had raised a lot of pent up aggression within the young teen. He flew by the basics in no time, and with some negotiating of his parents he dropped baseball for training completely. Though it was through his martial training that his awareness started to peak, sometimes he would feel deadly chills through-out his body and other times he could swear he see things that weren't there.

It was around this time that he had met a rather attractive female by the name of Kiyala. She was in his martial arts class as well, and for things considered the top female fighter in there. Rain was close to being the top for males but he still just was not there yet. He struggled daily trying to improve not only to impress her but because he craved to be the best. It seems fighting brought out a certain determination within the usually thoughtful teen. Everything was going smoothly until Kiyala and Rain were set to spar, she was very skilled and as was Rain so when Kiyala had made a mistake in footing; Rain didn't want to embarrass her so he held back from delivering the winning blow. She saw this and grew angry throwing her training stick down and storming out of the dojo. Rain not fully understanding ran after her following her into the wood path that lead to both of their houses.

He barely managed to catch up with the clearly pissed of Kiyala, before she went off on him stating how he embarrassed her by not giving his all. He had a chill go through him but he pushed off to being sad about how he pissed his crush off. So much that he didn't notice a giant masked monster about to crush Kiyala. He quickly pushed her out the way of the beasts club only to be caught by it himself. He felt intense pain for a second and heard Kiyala yell something now indiscernible. Then the world fell away around him or so he thought. When he finally awaken he felt as if he was in a totally different world, in someways he felt more connected to this world. It wasn't until he ran into a couple of people who were nice enough to explain what happened. Essentially, he was dead and a soul reaper had saved his soul from becoming hollowfied by sending him here.

However, he wasn't sent to the nicer districts of Rukongai. Instead he resided in the crime filled and death ruled, he quickly fell in with one of the gangs of the district. They could see even before Rain could that he had power that would only grow the longer he saw conflict. They had first set him up in organized brawls, but even though he had the skill that wasn't his calling instead they set him up for something different. Assassination was what seemed to fit his style, first he was sent assassinate low level targets like those who hadn't paid their tribute. The first kill had whet his appetite for something he didn't know he hungered for. . . power and death. Rain made himself and the gang their own small wealth just for taking any contract and following it through to the end. Soon, Rain began growing his own noteworthy spirit presence but with those on the outside being so naive to the true strength of soul reapers they greedily took a contract to kill a Captain.

Rain prepared day and night for this prospect even poisoning his katana. So when he sprung out of the shadows on the Captain he expected this to be a quick kill. Until the Captain turned and side stepped him with dizzying speed, and within the next second he was disarmed and had a Zanpakuto was at his neck. He knew this was the permanent death for him this time. Until the Captain told him that since he wanted to be an assassin, that if he wanted to live he would have to grow to be his successor. Rain agreed not because it would save his life but because it promised more death and more power to be gained. Rain was enrolled into the Shinigami Academy and graduated in record time only to enlist in Squad 2 by his life-saving Captain. Rain went from crawling his way to the top, to walking and finally to shunpo'ing his way to the top. It took him almost 200 years but finally he was awarded the title and rank of Captain of Squad 2

Inner world appearance:
Shisou's inner world consists in duality on one half will be a cheerful happy sunny day with a waterfall constantly raining down into a giant lake. And on the other half the waterfall has dried up and now consist of the rocks that lay under the waterfall. The lake is dried up and all vegetation has died off. On the side of death rains the corrosive acid that his shadows hold and darker ambitions whisper into your mind constantly. Standing in the middle of the lake is what Shisou used to look like before separating into two entities. Night never falls on the daylight side while on the death side nothing but night is eternal.
Zanpakutō

Name: Shisou Zanpakutō spirit:
Shisou is comprised of two spirits one beautiful and the representation of a justified death meaning she believes in bringing death for a crime or something that doesn't line up with her or her makers moral code. Her name is Sou and her counterpart being Shi represents the hidden darkness within Rain's soul; the part of him that hungers for death and power. She represents the coldness and power that one's death brings. Sou is actually quite mothering toward Rain while still holding the firmness it takes to push him toward greater strength. While Shi would much rather mock and antagonize Rain, but she does it out of a weird sense of caring as well. As she can see at least in her eyes that Rain still hasn't faced the full grasp of how bleak reality is. However, whenever she does show pure compassion for Rain it is more likely in the form of how an older sister would treat her youngest brother instead of like the equals they are.
Sealed form:
Shisou in sealed form is split into two objects, Shi being a long elegant blank cane. On the other hand Sou is a black elongated knife that holds a diamond in the middle of the hilt. At the end of hilts lies a metal loop that when attached to Shi, attaches a razor sharp chain to Sou that can extend 20 feet long.

[b>Shikai

Call out phrase: Sorera wa dare esukēpu shi o miseru
Shikai description: Shisou breaks down in half but the other non-bladed side gains one. They turn into two elongated tantos gripped between his fingers, and now they are piercing black and Shi transforms completely becoming a visible aura of dense dark shadows that overtake most of Rain's form. This becomes useful when Rain is undercover because it allows him to blend in with any dark area.

Ability: Shadow Release

Techniques:
Shadōkurafuto: [Shadow Craft]: This ability allows him to forge weapons out of the shadows that surround him as well as control them independent of him holding them.

Kage no kiga: [Hunger of the shadows]: This techniques takes the shadows that normally encloak Rain and sends them to the skies above (or roof w/e), the shadows condense and begins to rain. The rain that touches there target has a corrosive effect quickly eating away at his enemy. Forms of corrosive shadow onto any non-living thing it lands on, for these corrosive shadows is a one post window of how long they can last. As for the rain that hits its foe as long as they is something for the shadows to eat it will continue.

Shi no ikari: [Wrath of Death]: This technique is only available when Rain's life is on the line, all the shadows that surround him are absorbed into his body. For the next two posts he is able to shrug off damage done to him. Not to say that it doesn't affect him but simply that he can ignore it's effects for that short period.

Bankai Has not achieved yet.

Bankai name: Shi no hōyō
Bankai description: Upon this release, his tantos wither away combining into a singular double bladed katana. In response to this the shadows spike as well growing more numerous and crowd his form even more. Each one of his steps leaves behind a small traces of his shadows. That eventually dissipate returning to him after he gets a certain distance away from them. His body being now cloaked in shadows making him invulnerable to his own corrosive properties that are now active around him. Now when he slices an opponent it has that added corrosive effect.
Ability: Shadow Release
Techniques:
Shadouhando: [Shadow Hand]: At this point the shadow's have literally became an extension of Rain. He can reach out and his shadows will elongate to fufill his intentions whether to grab, claw, or crush his opponent. Anyone with sufficient reiastu can overpower this so it is not set in stone. However, with his shadows corrosive effect one should be wary to even let it touch them.

Shadō kajō kaki: [Shadow Bullets]: By extending out his hand or zanpaktou, he can fire repeated bullets of shadows at his foe. The bullets have the capacity to pierce armor and skin but the amount he can fire greatly depends on how much energy he has left.

Shadōdansu: [Shadow Dance]: Utilizing his own speed, Rain proceeds to shunpo around his enemy leaving behind his trace amounts of shadows. When he finishes he called out Shisou, and all the shadows leap out toward each other if done successfully they should also ensnare the enemy within the shadows. As soon as the enemy is captured, the shadows become razor sharp making physically resisting a dangerous prospect. As the corrosion began to tear away at the enemies body.

Stats:
Rank/level - ADP-2
Hankou - 9
Reiryoku - 8
Hakudo - 8
Seijuu - 8
Bukijuu - 8
Hoho - 9
Points awarded: 0
Total points: 50

Role-play sample:
"As you can see, the deal is too sweet on your end to pass up ain't it?"

"Haha, your people always funny, always overconfident in what they do me thinks."

"Well, alright if you don't want more space to expand your profits, I'll take my deals to the Syndicate."

"What makes you think I'll let you out of here alive?"

"I could ask you the same; Hutt."

The talk on this deal was going dreadfully slow and it required a lot more patience than she usually exercised. It was nothing more than a cycle, she would get a little closer to sealing the deal each time. However, each time it would only be passed off by a sarcastic comment or a slight threat to test the waters. One had to stay on their feet, she was not yet still confident she could take down everyone in this dark cellar like ominous room. The darkness sooth her as if her connection to the dark side by extension brought the shadows with her. Each movement hard or very hard to see, but sometimes in a dire situation each move count. She had to walk a tight rope with these Hutts and other slavers and thugs. No force user was well liked around these parts since the Shadow wars, Kiara took part in that war as well. She was with Vexas at the diplomatic debates and on the field when the action transpired.

"You see, but what your asking for is too much me thinks"

"But are the rewards not worth it, or do you all assume to waste my time. I came to everyone here because we all want something and are willing to do whatever to get it. Or are we not, is this not a room full of the galaxy's best slavers and criminals. And not only am I offering air space within our space and your more space than you can manage now when we return in dominance."

"But who's to say you and your kind will return to power, maybe they're are some who believe it is our time to rise"

"Yes, maybe we take your idea and put ourselves on top."

A darkness clouded the already shadowed room, but a feeling of oppression was in the air. Even those, not sensitive to the force would feel it's effect and succumb to it's sheer weight. Eyes shifted uncomfortably at others through-out the room. Kiara sat in her elevated seat still not having moved a muscle to display any anger or malice but her sheer presence now unsettling around her. Sure, everyone would not be effected by this but it would suffice for what she needed.

"Do you really think I'm a fool enough to have told you a tenth of my true plan, with or without your cooperation my plan will play out and when it does I think you will want to be on my side"

"One wonders whether to call your bluff or not."

A lightsaber sprang from Kiara's robes arcing perfectly into the goggled Rodian's throat. As suddenly as the action occurred was as suddenly that her saber disappeared back within her robes. Her eyes slightly tinted with red, as she only briefly but deeply used her dark side connection to the force to efficiently exterminate her problem.

"One second, one second was all it took to end this man. Before, you speak up remember while I will listen but that all it takes at the end of the day is one second.

"Eh, I take it negotiations are at their climax now then.

The bosses and leaders of several different sects of organized crime also dealing with slaving conferred with each other. Kiara idly tapped her fingernails against the soft but durable leathers that the chair she was sitting it was wrapped in waiting for their answer. She didn't want to think of what she would do if she had came all the way here risking her own safety for naught. She was asking for ten percent of their slaves for her and her 'enterprises' crusades construction project. If she was successful in these dealings she would then only need a proper setting for them to work and bring about her goals.

" We agree, but you better follow up on you end of the bargain when this is over or you won't like the next time you see us."

"Save it for people who actually fear you, and trust me I know true fear

As Kiara stood up from her seat readying herself to leave, a feeling of sheer terror washed over the room this feeling stronger than the last. Kiara with a coy smile, walked out of the cellar like room and after la long corridor ended up in an alley. She stepped out of the alley pulling her black fur coat around her body, she wore a long elegant dress with black fur robes over them. She looked around her lighting up a cigar before slowly walking down the platform blending into normal society.

You NEED and inner world appearance ._. Can't grade the profile till you add it.

Completed !

Your shadow walk technique is the same as Kizomaru Hotaru's Shadow step. since this ability is already in use, that technique will need to be replaced with something else or removed altogether.

Hunger of Shadows needs to have a post limit of only 1, to make it fair to the opponent.

Same with Wrath of Death. That is much too OP to be allowed a 6 post count. Only one or two posts should be allowed, and he still needs to take the effects after the technique wears off.

After that is all fixed, I can get on to grading the RP sample.

Done

Okay, looks fine now.

I can approve this for ADP-2 with 50 points. This level is not high enough to get you a captain's rank, but you can get any seated officer position from 3 to whatever. Also, you will need to make a note somewhere stating that this character has not achieved bankai yet, since the minimum level for bankai is ADV-3.

Once the points are applied to stats and checked, this application will be moved to accepted.

Done

Stats look fine, but you still need to change the rank, either to a seated position, or just unseated.

Done

Moving this to accepted~