Koounwarui Orochi

Name: Koounwarui Orochi
Age: Looks 22
Gender: Male
Rank: Undefined
Weapon(s):
Hairikomu: This weapon is 5 feet long completely made of black iron, the tip is narrowed to a tip which shows that it ain't broad. The hole thing looks like a giant senbon made for the throwing, the spear has a slippery coating that resists blood and tissue on it that makes it hard to control. The only one that seems to be able to use the spear is Orochi.

Personality: Orochi was a monster in life time and in his past life he resembles this, he is lustful and enjoys watching woman and men squeel in pain as he impale them over and over again. His true malice is his love to rape and abuse who ever makes him angry and peeks his eye. He is known to be tiredly malicous and even sick to degree but under all this grotsque mask is a tender soft soul. His faviorite hobby is killing but he also likes to paint and draw out his sadistic fantasies, a form of release. He consider older music better the soft violin against a piano that has low then high notes. His faviorite foods are milk base such as porridge, cheese, and sometimes a dry cheese cracker. He profers the color red or white even a mix to a dark pink but he either profers white or red. He absolutely hates red scarves and painted faces. He wants to see tons of skin and nothing more.

Physical Appearance: Orochi is about 5 foot 9 inch tall and weighs no more then 250 lbs, his over all build is very thin built, his skin tone is gray in color. Orochi has thick long white/red hair, the red mixes well with the black being patched work togethor as of in a undetermined patter, his hair goes down to his mid back, under his thick bangs two dark eyes peer out each a iredescent black. Wings sprout from his back representing something of a bat but with three only bones the total wingspan is 10 feet, The middle bone was longest ranging to be about 5 feet and the one farthest from the body is about 4 feet long, and the closet to the body is 3 feet tall. The hole wing is a velvety black and feels really soft just like a mammals, the sails of flesh is see through basically but is still velvety. Six 8 feet long tentacles are wrapped around his waist slim and slimy like almost coated with a slight coating almost like babys oil but the feel of the tentacles are still velvety and is a black. The hands of Orochi are fingernailless until you look much closer, you notice a slit which holds the black bladed fingernails which extend out two inches. Orochi wears a large black cloak hiding his wings, tentacles and most of his hands, under the cloak he is shirtless but has black pants that are buckled tight to him, each of the buckles are a shiny silver. Only other thing that he has on other then the cloak and pants is on his wrist going up to his bicep these sleeves have silver buckles on them holding tightly to his bicep. His ears, nose, the bridge on his nose are all pierced with silver studs the only thing to scar his perfectly sqaure face.

Bio:
Orochi was born from a african man and a japanese woman, his mother was rapped by Orochi's father leaving his mother to defend by herself with a child. This was the late 1789 where aborotions was taboo and most woman didn't know of orphanage's. Actually there was no orphanage in the small city at all. Orochi's mother resented him through the ages of a baby to about six but she neglected him still except when she had to feed him, change him or cloth him. Once Orochi learned to do all of these he was left to himself to fend for himself. He grew quickly into a street rat aiming to feed himself since his mother didn't stock food and when she did it was for herself if he asked from food from her it ended in a brutal beating, with each brutal beating's he stole more food to survive on his own. This path of beating and fending for himself soon made him psycotic, the lord of the land figured him out and sent him to a orphanage.

Growing up into the orphanage he was again beaten to a degree making him more psycotic by the age of 15 he ran away half a dozen times which all ended in failure getting caught, he ended up in turn to be in constant attention of the staff of orphanage. Orochi was schooled at the orphanage only giving him more mental images and hatred for living, his pyscotic behaviour's got worser and worser stabbing his teacher over and over in the hands making her bleed, this was all down with a pencil. The teacher actually put this aside as a temper tantrum. He started to murder soon after finding his pleasure and happiness in his life, He was the age of 17 when his first killing happen he stabbed his female victim over 30 times with a iron bar making her bleed to death slowly, he started to evolve into his murder his next victim he paralyzed her with a stab to the spine and raped her over and over again leaving her womb bloody, he slashed her lungs so she wouldn't scream when he did her again and again even after she was dead, He left this victim hanging by her feet in the courtyard, blood draining from her lips slowly. This was his most gruesome and his trade mark changed again to multiple stabbings to the stomach keeping away from most vital orgins along with a brutal raping. He grew to be the age of 22 this is when a villager found him killing his 89th victim raping her a lonely late night walker saw what he was doing and came behind him to swiftly chop his head off quickly with a kama.

After his death he soon became a hollow, a monster that has no soul or reason to live except to eat. As a hollow he was different though able to control the need on who to feed on and what suits him better, he found the souls of pretty young woman and handsome young men only edible and wish to hunt for them only. When he finally made the rank of a gillian in hollow level, he was slain down by a soul reaper taking him to his final hell. Hell showed to be the best making him into a togibito which he took pride into. He had all his needs to take other woman and male togibitos to a thrilling end.

Ability:
Metal Manipulation: He can manipulate most metals but others are harder for him to manipulate but to this effect he only use iron to manipulate so his strong point is turning a piece of metal into iron and then able to manipulate it better. He can not change metals that are close off from iron like titanium or Aluminum. The iron in his blood on the other hand he can manipulate if he wishes but again weak point is your draining your blood to make a weapon. He can't manipulate objects that ain't in a hands reach or actually touching.


Techniques:
Yarichi-Shinshen(Fresh blood spear): Able to solidify his blood into a spear which is made completely of solidified blood which is iron hardened. This techniques is not really not recommended because it actually uses blood. This is Orochi less used techniques because this uses his blood.

Kinzokuoto(Metal Sound): This technique makes the grind of metal to make a high pitch noise which breaks the sound breaker, as the technique goes it makes it quicker. The technique doesn't work all the time and can end up grinding against the skin of Orochi hurting him.

Katmari-Tetsu(Iron Clot): This technique is able to clot most deep wounds that hasn't sunk to deep into a major vein quicker and leaving a layer of armor. This technique in facts takes iron in the surrounding area or the blood that has welled turning it closer to iron ranging the particles into a sheet. This makes a form of armor for Orochi.
Role-play Sample:
A breeze blew across a dead dessert with white sand dune's, the smell of blood was on the wind the feeling of panic and fear was felt soon after this was like a itch in the back of the throat. This presences and smell came from a togibito in a black cloak, the cloak was wrapped around the togabito loosely but still hid most of all of the appearance. Suddenly in another flash four other togabito's armed with shiny silver claw's sonido around the other togabito, the sound of there presence was loud, the beings where all looking grim at the creature. The first togibito thought sadly "Am I still being hunted down or wanted.".

The togibito gave a long growl saying in a old English manner which sound masculine, the smell of roses on his breath. "Brothers and Sister's what do you wish from me." With a unexpected attack the other togibitos attacked the masculine togibito, the masculine togibito turned all the sudden quickly a spear flashed in his hands which didn't seem to be seen till know.

The creature stabbed the closet being which seemed to be female through the stomach lodging in there making her fall to the ground several feet away, the masculine togibito quickly rolled around to kick the other togibito across the chest sending the togibito spinning away about ten feet away into a sand dune, sand fell over the togibito. The remaining two which are male and female got close enough to harm the togibito but the creature took the hit's respectfully, he moved forward so the claws of the one togibito slashing into his cloak into his chest, the other togibito other's claw got the hood of the togibito tearing it off to reveal the sqaure face of Orochi the white/red hair fell down blooming around the iridescent black eyes.

The male togibito's flashed at Orochi quickly aiming the claws downwards in a slow slash, Orochi actually grabbed the claw with a quick twist he broke the wrist bones and bicycled kicked this one into another sand dune crashing sand around him. Orochi turned to the remaining female togibito, Orochi thought "She is a pretty thing." From inside the cloak four long tentacles sprang forth, the woman had the courage to cut one tentacle off blood spewing on the ground. Two of the three remain tentacles sprang forth wrapping around the ladies wrist picking her up in the air. The third rapping around her inner thigh feeling her special place between her leg's. Blood was draining from the fourth tentacle, Orochi brought his hand over to the blood. "Yarichi-Shinshen" The blood moved to form a solid spear made of iron into the hands of Orochi.

Orochi examined the spear quietly with a wild gleam, the female togibito was know screaming in terror know what came next. Orochi started to stab the woman over and over again into the female togibito's stomach, he stabbed a total of 34 times until hitting the death point of the togibito. Then Orochi raped the dead corpse violently and then through her to the wind. Orochi was know gleaming with malice as he moved back to the spear, his tentacle that was cut was know slowly healing back. The tentacles wrapped around his waist hiding them completely, Orochi picked up the spear examining it before hiding it under his cloak. He didn't really care if any of the other togibitos survived, he had his fun.

Point-55/Rank adp 1
Awarded- 3
Hankou - 9
Reiryoku - 10
Hakudo - 10
Seijuu - 10
Bukijuu - 9
Hoho-10
Total: 58

For all races except sin embodiment, the general idea is for them to have one ability, and then a bunch of techniques (which are not limited in number anymore) that relate to that ability. Only one ability though. I'm seeing metal in there a lot, so maybe have your main ability something to do with that, then place the rest in your technique list, if they relate to the ability of course. If any don't, you can try to convert them so they do, or just remove them altogether.

Other than that, everything looks fine. I can approve this for an ADP-1 with 55 points once the modifications listed above have been made.

Alright. I can change them know. Abilities are nut's anyhow.

All right.

Approved for ADP-1 with 55 points.

Once these points are applied to your stats, this topic will be moved to approved.

Alright. 55 is there.