Tsukishima Hikaru [wip]

Name: Tsukishima Hikaru

Nickname: Tsuki Chan , Tsu

Age: 200 looks 21

Gender: male

Squad: 6

Rank: Vice Captain

Weapon(s): zanpaktou

Personality:
Tsuki is pretty a good guy who seems very come a collected. But , he is usaully on edge about many things in his life. Despite being the nice guy he is he has a really short temper. If you piss him off and hurt someone he loves you will get it. If he's allowed to kill something that pissses him off he will do it. If he isnt allowed to kill he will hit and try to hold back. In the mists of his yelling he has quiet the potty mouth. He doesnt give a damn who hears or who cares about his actions. He 's not a guy you want to be on the bad side off. If he doesnt want to talk to you he will ignore you or walk away.

Tsukishima is embrassed easily when it comes to umcomfortable situation. He can become very shy and blushy when flustered. When he's under stress he often bangs his head against things. In a relationship he is very affecntionate and over protective of the other person. If someone flirts with his boyfriend or girlfriend he will flip out. If he doesnt reassure himself that everything is fine it will just make him angry and twitchy. Tsuki is a kinda a " dumb blond" in certain situations. He says things wrong like : the ghost is clear instead of the coast is clear. It also takes him a few minutes to pick on certain things like jokes etc.

He also has the tendancy to zone out and go into his own little world. When he spaces out he has the tendancy to often fall asleep. In battle he is serious and mericless when fighting his opponent. He hates when people sit around and endanger others so, he will pick them up and carry them if he has too. Tsuki doesnt like his skin touch by others because it makes him feel vulnerable. When he's flirted with he becomes blushy and flustered very easily. Tsuki isnt good at keeping in his feelings either. If your in a realationship with him keep him on a tight leash. Despite all his flaws he is a pretty sweet , caring , loyal guy.He can also be a little self centered sometimes and he is kind of a neat freak.


Physical Appearance:
Tsuki stands at 6"0 feet tall and weighs about 155 pounds.On the top of his head he has messy blond hair that shages into his eyes. Like his mother he has golden eyes. Tsuki isnt buff looking but , he does have a nicely toned chest. Tsuki likes to dress pretty casual and comfortable. On a daily basis he wears a black kimono top with a white under kimono top and hamaka pants. On his feet he wears tabi socks and sandals. . As for his sword he keeps it stuffed in his obi.. Under his kimono he only wears a pair of boxer shorts.
Bio:
Tsukishima's father was a member of the noble hikaru family of the seretei. When his father was 12 he was engaged to Tsuki's mother. A year later they were marraied and she moved into the clan household. When she was eighteen in apperance she finally had Tsukishima. At a young age his father trained him with a sword and his mother taught him about kidou. At 13 tsuki entered the shingami school and got into the advanced class.
Inner world appearance:
Its a forest with glowing light blue tress that seem to extend into the sky forever. The sky is filled with fluffy white clouds that swirl and change from white to blue. All the time it snows and light winds fly around the forest. At the top of the a hill theres a snowy cave with icicles hanging off the entrance. Outside the cave there is a blue pillow where tsukishima sits when he comes to visit his zanpaktou.

Zanpakutō


Name: Yuki Neko [snowflake cat]

Zanpakutō spirit: In animal form its a large white tiger with glowing ice blue eyes. Around the tiger's neck it has a dark blue ribbon. In human form its a handsome teenage male with ice blue eyes that glow slightly. The teens hair stops at his neck and flips out at the sides. On his head he has blue cats ears that match his hair. He also has a long kitty tail that matches his cat ears. He wears a dark blue kimono with white snow flakes on it. On his feet he wears tabi socks and straw sandals. Under each eye he has a white snow flake tattoo.

Sealed form:
In sealed form it looks like a regular sized kantana but, all together it is 41 inches in length. The hilt is wrapped in ice blue wrappings. The butt on the sword has a 12 inches dark blue ribbion hanging off. The hilt guard is a snow flake with a cat's eye in the middle. The holder is ice blue with a snowflake design on each side.
Shikai


Call out phrase: Claw Vengance

Shikai description: When realsed it takes the form of what looks like a stop sign. At the top the staff is a large snowflake. At the bottom a blue string sticks out. The whole thing is about a inch shorter than him. The snowflake is 7 inches across and 5 inches high.

Ability:
Wave claw:
Tsuki does a spin and whips his sign out in front of him. What seems like millions of snow flakes in a blizzard crash toward the target in a wave. Its strong enough was over the enemy and semd them flying down at street. It travels at an emence speed and causes random cuts all over the body. He also use it to wash over a fire and put it out.
Techniques:

Forst bite:
Tsuki can spin or do this move by slashing the air in some way. This move sends about 50-1000 snowsflakes at the target. The snowflakes act like shuirken and cut and stab like them as well. The are each 6 inches wide and then spin toward the target at a emense speed.

Bankai


Bankai name: arashi neko [strom cat]

Bankai description: Tsuki gains ice blue kitty ears and a tail and claws. A snow like fog then surronds him. In this form he can control the fog like a weapon. Tsuki's eyebrows also frost over and his hair gains scattered crystals in it. His staff is encased in ice and the topper rersembles an icey cats head.

Ability:
Using his staff as a controller he can control the snowny fog that surrounds him. When command to this fog can be used like a whip. When the target is hit they feel like their getting hit with hundreds of hail stones. He can also send the icey fog at someone like a jet. He can also break up the fog and use it like projectiles much like his snowflake shuirken. However , in this form they are the size of flower petals and they act like thousands of tiny blades. These blades can spin around the target and then shoot at them one at a time or all at once. The amount depends on the command of Tsukishima and his staff.

Techniques:
Using his staff as a controller he can control the snowny fog that surrounds him. When command to this fog can be used like a whip. When the target is hit they feel like their getting hit with hundreds of hail stones. He can also send the icey fog at someone like a jet. He can also break up the fog and use it like projectiles much like his snowflake shuirken. However , in this form they are the size of flower petals and they act like thousands of tiny blades. These blades can spin around the target and then shoot at them one at a time or all at once. The amount depends on the command of Tsukishima and his staff.


Role-play sample:
[from another kind of site using this char]

Tsukishima made an annoyed sound to himself as he entered the hot spring that early evening. Upon seeing him the lady at the desk lit up but , the blond didn't notice. When he approached the counter the women immediately handed him the fluffiest towel. Tsuki blinked at her in confusion and wondered how she read his mind." Uh yeah thanks" he said to her as he wondered if they had invented a new mind reading jutsu. As he he walked toward the men's section he wondered if he could learn that type of jutsu.

Upon entering the changing room he was glad no one else was there. Even though that was true he brought his clothes with him anyway. When he entered the steam filled bath tub room he stopped for a moment and closed his eyes. He loved the feeling of the fresh steam on his face as soon as he entered the room. After standing there for a few more moments he made his way over to the waters edge. Shortly after putting his towel down he began removing his kimono. Once it was removed he neatly folded it and grabbed his fluffy towel.


Once he remembered that no one was there he put his towel on his clothes pile. After sniffling slightly he slipped into the warm water. When the heat tickled his body he twitched slightly and adjusted his position. As some footsteps and giggling could be heard in the lobby he closed his golden eyes. When a few moments passed he puts his arms behind him and slipped into the water a little more. " Ngh" came a noise from his lips when a few warm bubbles massaged his lower back.

The blond ninja really loved coming to the hot spring when no one was around. He had a bad habit of making weird noises when the bubbles hit his back so, it was always good to be alone. On more than one occasion he had fallen asleep in here but, he had the skill of falling asleep where ever he wanted anyway. After another soft sigh of delight he drifted off to sleep slightly. It was quiet so he figured that no one was going to come in and disturb his relaxation time.

You're missing a Bio, and the Shikai ability comes off as a technique, so you'll want to edit that. Once that stuff is taken care of, I can get on to grading the rp sample.